Nice try man...
I am not a literature man! So I can’t crucify your poem. Yet, your style and techniques are fine with little fragments in some sentences like this one: “It knocks my many doors with its half Permission waiting for the green light okay
”. This is may be because you are directly doing a translation inside your mind from the mother language of yours (Arabic) to the English. Don’t do so, always try to think and write in English.

Any way, it was really nice and acceptable …
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