TrueLove

[هجيرالصمت]

true love
cannot be hold
cannot be sold
have no end
its afact
kind of art
feed of heart
you are the only love that i know
you are the court and my law
you are the proof of gravity law
remember party which i was invite with u
i was stolen looking at you
its seems to me such as space flow
i used to wonder about your own
who are you
where did u came from?
are you human ?
can you breath /
are you from the earth?
or some where far in space ?
i wonder
sweety you are so beatiful today
so no one will blame if i love you
and my love for ever for you will be true

[T_zone]

Hi there

so romantic
and wounderful poem

best wishes .
and good luck

a wish :
we are looking forward to read your ((arabic )) poems
thank you .

[بنت العرب]

سلام أخي هجير الصمت

كيف حالك؟
وين هالغيبة؟

True Love
Is what I look for
?Where can I find it
When will it come
Knocking on my door
...Is it a mystery
?With no solution
?Is it a wish
?Is it a hopeless dream
?Or is it just a chimerical illusion

Oh True Love
?Do you exist
Or are you like
?The morning mist

Dear brother, what you have written is quite nice.....it just needs some grammar, spelling and punctuation check....but the material itself is good....
I have a question that is nagging me.....how come you are writing in English? Don't tell me the special person is non-Arab.....
إوعك!!! http://www.swalif.net/swalif1/ubb/smile.gif
I look forward to read more poems by you

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[هجيرالصمت]

mr t_zone
thank u very much for ur words
its make so me very hapy that u felt what i wrote
reqarding arabic i wrote few and i will try write more
thanx dear

[هجيرالصمت]

dear sis
thanx so much three time
once coz u reply my poem
2nd coz u let me enjoy reading ur very special way in poems
3rd for ur advice to me
u r right it need soem few gramer and spilling or spelling and i will
try care these things in future
what u espect from first poem i wrote my life